This was not very good at all.
First and foremost I am not a rude person. However, I belive in leaving a honest review. This was not a very good flash at all. Now, there was some good parts to your flash. I just feel that it was lacking in the whole plot of your movie. The whole time I had no idea what was going on. It looked like you took some random scenes and through them together and came up with this crap. With as much time and effort that you put forth, I feel that you could have done much better. It looks like you know what you are doing with flash and you have experance. I would sugest you take your time and plan a new well thought out project and then start on it. Better luck next time man.